The Uncrucified (Beta Draft) (Most Current Draft)
STATUS: Abandoned
An expanded version of Kalara's memoir retold in a traditional novel 3rd person voice with more immersive details. As it stands, this draft expands on the first story arc completed in the Alpha Draft and will cover the same territory as the Alpha Draft, but with more detail added to the very beginning in Gem after taking into account feedback from the community given during the Alpha Draft.
Currently abandoned as I work on reformatting this story as a comic instead with a nonlinear framework. You can read a preview of this story's new direction in The Uncrucified: Second Breath.
Find all the chapters in Google Docs for reading/commenting here.
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
The Uncrucified (Alpha Draft)
STATUS: Abandoned
An expanded version of Kalara's memoir retold in a traditional novel 3rd person voice with more immersive details. This draft completes arc 1 of Kalara's tale, but it leaves out most of her time in Gem, which is expanded on in the Beta Draft.
Chapter 8
STATUS: Complete!
This was the original short story that started it all! Detailing Kalara's recollection of her mortal life from the perspective of a newly chosen Solar. Written in 1st person perspective. If you'd rather keep the events of her life a surprise, don't read this one! This is the most chronologically complete story, but it leaves out a lot of detail and is in a rough format before I had feedback from the Exalted community.
Read Online:
Fanfiction.net | AO3 (Archive of Our Own) | DeviantART | Wattpad
Listen to the Audiobook:
iTunes | YouTube | Soundcloud
Read on Your Computer/Tablet:
Download PDF | Download EPUB
Memoir of Kalara Vadras, The Uncrucified
STATUS: Complete!This was the original short story that started it all! Detailing Kalara's recollection of her mortal life from the perspective of a newly chosen Solar. Written in 1st person perspective. If you'd rather keep the events of her life a surprise, don't read this one! This is the most chronologically complete story, but it leaves out a lot of detail and is in a rough format before I had feedback from the Exalted community.
Read Online:
Fanfiction.net | AO3 (Archive of Our Own) | DeviantART | Wattpad
Listen to the Audiobook:
iTunes | YouTube | Soundcloud
Read on Your Computer/Tablet:
Download PDF | Download EPUB
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